well, odd and interesting concept, got points for that - tbh tho' you should really had done something specificly out of it - tribal patterns, maybe some sort of wicked platings/ornamental armor to make it more interesting, since the whole black and blue theme gets dull quickly with this little variation - the feather blur is the #1 tho'! But, especially the beak should be redrawn, and imho even tho' the red glow effect of the eye is cool, it should not cover the eye completely, if you wanted a more "evil" or in any case, desireableeffect