is this going to be used on the mini map preview. i think you should redo the logo, i dont expect you to make a great logo because doing logos is a skill in itself, i know i've recently had to make 1 for a band, its hard work. try and think of the consept of the bloodlust ablity, the icon, and colours and blend them together with the text.
first pic you ever made in photoshop? what do you expect from that piteful comment, do you expect rejunevation, salvation or even kind comments?
Too much text, and it's not copy right, i could make a campaign with the same name without any problems.
It's extremly bad. you could make it bigger, why shrink it? that's senseless. background is horrible, i dont know what is it, it looks like you took filters or something similar.
if it's your first pic ever, that doesnt matters, treat it like if it was your 3434343th pic. if it's not good, don't submit it, that's all, you know what you did wrong.