too basic, looks as if somone didnt finish thoer drawing, or if they just started. needs- shading, face, metallics(in blades), muscles, hair, wrinkles(in pants), minor details, ect. if you cant finishe the figure, then dont submit it. btw metabee, the best artist in my class is a girl, and she is hella good.
well, some people here just want to help you get better and better. I know drawing isn't easy. and still, if you just work, you can be as good as anyone else.
although wormskull has a point. you can't be good at drawing faces if you avoid them. i'm the same, i can't draw faces either, but i try and practice. i like the swords, but the picture would look better with more shading. although that's something that one has to practice really hard to improve in. i see potential in this, just continue drawing, and you will see that it will pay off.
WORMSKUUL SHUT THE F--- UP YOU SUCK AT DRAWING YOU CANT DRAW YOU CANT DRAW F---IN ANY THING I CANT DRAW FACES MY FLAW JUST isnt as bad pull the trigger buddy
and you know you can do some kind of wireframe for the face to know where to place all, just do it lighter, go buy a 3h and/or 6h pencil cost approximatly $1