good job Newb! ur drawings are nice! and metabee watch your thongs going wrong

Quote:Her positure, is all wrong, and the neck is far 2 long. it looks like a cra*ulent geomerge
????? what about neck he's not too long...and the positure is nice is just cause I put the paper badly in the scanner!

Her positure, is all wrong, and the neck is far 2 long.
it looks like a cra*ulent geomerge

it lacks muscle detail and shading. once you do those it will turn out better, and we can see things to help you on

i would hit her. watch her front legs, one knee is upper than another. not much to say, you mainly lack shading, 45 minutes of shading.