If you think it looks bad, then dont post it, looks like ur very young, and you didn't catch the deviant look on his face. The arms are 2 thin, and isn't muscular. The legs are deformed. The pelvis and down, is placed 2 far down. It's very deformed.
its kind of squigly. it looks clean, but the appendages arent straight and realistic looking. maybe looking (or having) your model more often would help, plus experience.
hmm, it looks like you copied exactly the MODEL of archimonde. doing a little copying and taking reference was never a bad thing, it was a very good thing, but now if you trace exactly how looks like the model without trying to do any change you did the drawing for no fruitful reasons. there is already an artwork of archimonde by samwise, try to take in reference his artwork, copying/tracing models or anything that refers to freneticly copying wont lead you to anything. or even better, try to do something of your own
(You could try to completly draw inside/color his cape)
