As you can see, the .tif scanner I use makes lines around the shins, and darkens the drawing. And as some people have said, she is not holding carrots. Those are crystaline swords.
jawohl fraulein - I agree with Tari, your Alien picture was way better... mayhap that was more motivated givin how you have an affinity for those creatures - so, you should draw "bigger". Another word for "bigger" is "greater", so when you draw "bigger" you can draw "greater" as in, greater artistic expression (I did not say value, sweetie) and you'll be surprised of the volume on a piece of paper you can work on. AND to further a point, you obviously allready know how to do shading, and is certainly not unfamiliar with proportions either (though the abdomen and hips does not work with eachother in this pic, which you knew when you submitted, and was too lazy to erase ^^), next is those tiny dots and curves that we call details - work with them on the entire drawing - honey, this looks abonded in comparison with, well your first Assasin, and certainly your Alien
@Arkanasys - if you were commenting more, I'd point on you as art section moderator, simply because of that single comment, so get moving, you cheerfull and spirited soul! ^^
Yo there Kerrighan, good to c ya again.. Besides all the (more or less) usefull comments posted here by our great experts.. dont get urself down.. i know u got talent i saw it.. so.. just 1 suggestion my friend.. Take the concept..ur idea.. keep it in mind.. but try to draw her not from a frontal position.. use a 3/4 point of view.. ull find it easier.. and im sure u ll get something far better.. And cheer up Kerrighan ur a good buddy ^^
work on the face, I like the left sword, but you have done much better work, like with the alien. her body looks normal for a female, she just needs more hips and show more muscles.
you might want to erase her eyes, since they're extremly misplaced. maybe you could cut some of her stomach and add hips, since female hips tends to get larger than males. the bottom picture is fine, but the top needs work with the face and the smoothness of the arms
Looks under average. I think you would've done better by showing some musculine details or something like that. And her arms aren't drawn that well, so fix the angles for a better view.
