atryl you never seize to amaze

God, I hope you turned the drawing on the PC and not draw in that perspective - depth and overall perspective of limbs, background and whatnot is flawless - but compared to the other Deron, this one is somewhat "directly under the son" or sum'tin

'cause you lazy, lazy boy, when someone as ressourcefull as yourself draws, you should not hesitate to do shading en'mass
I'd say, that this is 4/5 but less then what is expected of you, so I push my rate down to a 3/5, simply to teach you a lesson