well, this could hardly be labeled "bad" - and the eyes
are on his body (look as to were the arms connect

) but, it seems you enjoy drawing some types of species from this univers you are creating, over the other - as in, the "Kram" race drawings you have submitted, seems more finished then your "Deron", and this drawing is an example of that - it is not "bad" but it is not "finished"