try to make it simple, dont put a whole face and a bit of arm, try to have a good, obvious and detailed view. we could only see fangs, beceause there could be million of different vampire faces, and beceause showing only the fangs increase the obviousiness of the icon. the you could put wathever you want, nothing, or a arm. the whole face simply needs work, you could focus on only doing a specific part instead of drawing a whole face, not to mention it doesnt fit that well on the icon. i havent seen much icons made by blizzard that completly shows the head of a unit doing a spell
Not only the eyes, but the blood and the face are not only creepy, but the blood is a bit unrealistic, and the DisBTN is a bit messed up. Still, nontheless, you are Juice_F, and are a great iconer