Not very good.
The terrain is very comprimized, make the scenery simply bigger and avoid edges in the ground.
There were no real effects, so this category will not be rated.
The sound is not very good. Make the voices of the persons better, let them speak more fluently or show only the subtitles.
Camera movement was also very average, e.g. the Airship was only shown to the half. Far away from being a really effective camera use.
Story was OK, not very much to say about it; the main part will follow in the campaign, I hope.
All in all:
Terrain: 3/5
Sound: 3/5
Cameras: 3/5
Story: 3/5
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3/5
Warnicro has done much better cinematics, I think he could improve this thing very much and give you tips, so ask him for help!
Yours truly
Waldbaer