5/10
Ok, i know its just a preview cinimatic, but there was lots opf room for improvement. The way all the units got stuck at the end was tacky and unproffesional. There was lots of spelling msitakes and The dialogue was not in character.
And one big question: How the hell did them fire demons get into the wooden boats without burning them to an ember. And you made this worse, because you state that the fire demons consist of real fire, thus why they needed to keep out of the rain.
Ok, i know its just a preview cinimatic, but there was lots opf room for improvement. The way all the units got stuck at the end was tacky and unproffesional. There was lots of spelling msitakes and The dialogue was not in character.
And one big question: How the hell did them fire demons get into the wooden boats without burning them to an ember. And you made this worse, because you state that the fire demons consist of real fire, thus why they needed to keep out of the rain.
