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Razilla`s destiny

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Submitted by RestInPiecesCampaign1,630 downloads1.7 MB
The First campaign made by Blood Hunter so it`s very small then but it`s about an Troll leader so you will read all from the beginning....
File Name
RazillasDestiny.w3n
Map Author
Blood Hunter
Suggested Players
1
Difficulty
Normal
Number of Missions
6
Type
.w3n

Missions

  1. Chapter One - Razilla`s Destiny/prolouge
  2. Chapter Two - Sacrafice
  3. Chapter Three - Lordaeron Travel
  4. Chapter Four - Storms of Terror
  5. Cinematic - Landing to Durotar
  6. Finale - End of Destiny

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Ill try to edit it
Looks promising :wink:
well not bad for your first campaign , i've seen worse , but i think u need to learn something about map making, ill edit this campaing to show how a good campaing is
Okay, big review chapter by chapter (mainly the points i didn't like but hopefully you take it constructively)

Chapter 1
-The Illusion spell at level 4 it says 0.28% dodge shouldn't this be 28% seeing as level 3 was 21%.
-It also says in level 1 that there is 0 X normal damage but then the actual spell says 2 X normal damage it appears however that it doesn't do any damage at level one.
-Wasn't sure where to go, ended up finding the correct place by accident and didn't get to explore half the map.
-Trees were obviously placed so that they enclosed a space (acted as dividers), it didn't look natural.
!Terrain was nice though
!Story idea not too bad

Chapter 2
-Not really a chapter would have been better to just have it as an interlude or something.
-Items and spells didn't cross over from the previous chapter

Chapter 3
!I love the chickens in the stock house
-Map size too big, if you don't need the whole map then cover up the rest of the space with creeps and areas of interest or just make it smaller, plan your map out on paper first see if that helps.

Chapter 4
-Too easy to kill the messenger, he came to me
-Didn't have to defend the alliance at all
!did take me a while to use the mass of tissue stored in my head at the start.

Cinematic
-Really didn't make a lot of sense

Finale
-Got pretty boring, everything was predictable, I could see Mathog's base the whole time
-Spent most of the time destroying buildings with no enemies attacking me. I destroyed a barracks with just chickens

Overall it started out well but lost it in the last few chapters, and each chapter was too easy not many challenges if any in each chapter. I also agree on many points that Ramza said; the spelling and grammar mistakes really detracted from the campaign to the point where it was difficult to work out what people where saying (i'll hazzard a guess and say english isn't your first language?), this is something you might want to get a beta for.

Congradulations on your first campaign but there is a lot of work to do on it yet, try not to take these comments too harsh, it's just my personality most of the time. 4/10 :)
I didnt like the campaign very much, cuz:

U didnt use weather effects and fog, the AI sucked ass (The only 'AI' was that u let some orcs attack ur base every ... seconds)
The Terrain wasnt very good 2. U did use different tilesets, but no hills, not much doodads, etc
Ur grammar is bad. Instead of:
Razilla !!!!! You still alive !!! I cant belive it !!!!!
write it like this:
Razilla! You are still alive! I can't believe it!
The cameras are okay, but why didnt u use some better camera angles (over-shoulder, close up, far away) instead of that all cameras almost looked like the ingame vieuw.
And u didnt use game caches.
I give it a 2-2.5/5