Errr... what was that? A skeleton and undestractable paladin. They beam and boom a little around and in the end... well, suddenly war3 returned to the menu, I remember that the skeleton was fallen down about the half way to ground...
Hey, the quest of the contest was not to make 2 minutes, but a good cinematic, I think. The shaking camera kills nerves after a while.
I recommend to put some moments of silence without much movement into it - that will make the action scenes work much more intensively. And a story would be nice, too. Just follow more the principe "quality is better than quantity". That also works on action cinematics!