I don't want pity, give me a real note based on your observation (but you're right, it was a real effort because I already planned to stop worldediting so I wasn't sooo motivated)
Technically not bad cinematic. Although it's nothing I could remember, because there is no story - if you wanted to make more cinematics, I would strongly recommend to give it an interesting story. I didn't like the music that much, but that's mainly because I don't listen to music of that style normally!
I'm glad too, I was asking myself "Why am I doing this ?" , "What's the point ?" ... And that was depressing but I've discovered the answer to these questions... For fun !
I begun making this cinematic some months ago but some events in my personal life made me give up with the World Edit, but here I am again, I've regained confidence and taste in Mapmaking so I continued this one and here it is.
It's some cool action scenes linked together by a 'difficult-to-understand' scenario but that's not like it's a bad thing, like that everyone will think something different. I put the DIO's music 'The last in line' because... Err... Because it's great and it was going along well with my cinematic.