Hmmmm, the preview looks like moments, so author might be the same, im ganna coment once i see it, but if its from author of moments, my expectations are high.
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edit: Hmmm, nice. 87/100 . It was very good, but could do with some improvement. For instance, the ending, the girl goes "Your strong now" and the other goes "thanks" . Thats not exactly realistic for after such an aggressive and deadly battle, even if they are imortal, which with the powers (all that jumping and stuff) they probably are meant to seem as. Also, a few times, there was a sort of "cut" sound as if someone had been cut into the flesh, where it should have been metal clanging sound, for clash of swords. A tacky abrubt ending, but, the cinematic was very good quality as usual, anyway.
Make more cinematics, 2-p, they r good
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edit: Hmmm, nice. 87/100 . It was very good, but could do with some improvement. For instance, the ending, the girl goes "Your strong now" and the other goes "thanks" . Thats not exactly realistic for after such an aggressive and deadly battle, even if they are imortal, which with the powers (all that jumping and stuff) they probably are meant to seem as. Also, a few times, there was a sort of "cut" sound as if someone had been cut into the flesh, where it should have been metal clanging sound, for clash of swords. A tacky abrubt ending, but, the cinematic was very good quality as usual, anyway.
Make more cinematics, 2-p, they r good
