Nice. If you made the glow bigger and perhaps added it to other palces (mabey change the hair to the glowey stuff) it would look good as a Blood Mage beserk form or something (you could use the chemical rage ability or something)
Acolyte, sorry to say, but that made no sense whatsoever. For one, if all you wanted to do was add glowing eyes, what's the point in doing more? Who made up the rule that says you have to have more than one modification to upload a model? I, for one, think this is not so useful, but that doesn't make it useless because it wasn't so heavily modified. Please, if you're going to give 'guidance', at least give advice that's worth something.
As for my critique- The glowing eyes is a nice addition, but it should have been a different color. Something that would go well with this model is a skin similar to that of the Priest's, as the glowing eyes are similar and could be used to create a sort of 'rank' among priests.
You added a particle emitter.... good for a first, but try to move up to doing more to your models other than addign one emitter. Dont mistake this for a flame, Im just trying to give guidance.