mech fiend 2.blp

yea it does need some work but it is still quite good.

Good... it looks really nice. I'd give it a 4/5 since it needs some more work.

not bad, but needs some overall shading, and maybe some colours?
also, increase the contrast or else it looks bad ingame

ok... please rate it

cables looked good, but if you were to add them, you would need to shade each one indiviadually, like on my skin.

it's good that you have shaded it more but it's a bit to bright now

There are no cables...

cables are better

Contrast: difference between light and dark. You don't have enough.

Luminosity: amount of "glow" I think. He means that this is all-round a bit too bright.

I have one thing to add: you really, really need a contrast colour somewhere on this. It looks far too plain. Perhaps bring back the wires but do them all flowing in the same direction. Also, you can make them look better than they did before by highlighting the middle and darkening the edges.

luminosity? contrast?

I think u must contrast and low the luminosity.
It looks almost perfect, continue !

too white, needs a lil more shading and highlightning

changes:

-removed the cables
-more lighter
-more shading