-edit- Nvm, just looked at that again and realised you did a lot to it.... it's just not immediately obvious.
Also, Wormskull's right about your SS-taking, just leave it again a flat background and make to sure to use up as much space on the image as possible with your pics of the model.
Wormskull you NEVER congratulate ANYONE except yourself. Then there is no point in being a critic. This is... cool, except that it looks a bit freaky I must admit
now lets talk about your idea of a murloc worm boy? hmm lets see if u are going to bitch about this skin dont submit worse yous doesnt even look nearly as nice as this one
please stop using filters and lens flares. i think it's nescesarry that i say having a flare len and whatever you have in the background is horrible, keep the background clean, thanks.
You still do those crudge black lines for contour, use it for your drawings, not while skinning. Apart from texture filters and some recolor, there is no major changes, try to make it more different next time.