yikes, bright yellow. yellow is not one of my favorite colours but there is no way i would ever dream of puting yellow on demon hunter let alone the bodie, theres no sence in it. the face is freehanded and the bodie is practicaly just a recolour, overall its either his first skin or he is really really bad at skining. stick to deleteing peoples work elf thats what your good at.
hum, the idea is not bad, but needs lots of shading, try to use some dodge/burn, and his face is weird O.o, i guess you could put more efort in his face ^^ (try to burn the area around his eyes)