erw, why are u so against dodge and burn?

Well.. The body is just ugly, not to be rude, but it's not very good.. looks like some food are smashed all over him :S The crown and blade doesn't look like metall, as it should!
The markings on the face is nice, try to remove the white stuff on the pants, remove the feeling of it as a sonta, or was that the point?

Make some new hair too
If you want a 5, make new pants, new blade, good shading and real looking metall

3/5