Face skintones are horrible. You seem too have only midtones and bright colors. When making faces go in this order: midtones,shadows,light,pink and then hair. Oh and btw nice hair. Males look beter with no upper lip or a smallone in skins.
He looks enough like a male, cheetory. But the lips needs fix. First off the upper lip doesn't wrap good. The under lip is too fat. And it would be better to alpha out that arm than keeping it like this. Ehmm.. Kinda the same for the legs. His teeths is very unreal - who has rectangular teeths?
The skin-tone is better on this one, but I'm not all satified with it.
Change the colour of his socks to brown and he's EGOR lol. Anyway it looks ok you should maybe try and get the face to look more male cause from far away he looks female cuz of lips.
Perhaps I'm looking at a different skin, but the blizzard one has normal size lip and no upper lip....also it doesn't have muscles....just bones. Perhaps clothes might be a better idea then bare skin.
There is no muscles on him.. just a crappy line.. blizzard employees got lazy, i didn't know how to place the musscles.. and the lips well they are also blizzards model. on their model their lips are that big.. if i didn't make them that big then the model would look retarted
Though.. the upper lip needs some work.. tho i dont want to piss afronight off...