I wrote this on spring break and have made up my mind to share it. It is part of a semi-long-short story I'm writing out of boredom. Enjoy
This world was once depleted of life… and yet a miracle had come. Miniscule rays of light finally shone upon the forsaken dark world of Intaro, and with this blessing came much change. The despaired cretin of Intaro, fleeing from the growing rays, drew ever closer to their pagan sanctum… chanting their final prayers and offering what they could to their fading deities. In their last vain attempts to flee into the dark crevices of their home, they were exposed to the great ray of light. Through this light, the beings were introduced to a new world—one with hope and freedom, unchained from the shackles of the darkness itself. The essence of darkness itself melted away from Intaro in the enchanted light. The savage and ravenous world of Intaro had finally seen a new perspective of existence. Yet despite this blessing, there were some that resented this change—the evil within them had not perished, but was a dying spark awaiting the opportunity to reclaim the lost world…
Yay, appreciation! Well, my imaginative brainkind of stopped at names for the world, so I could take some suggestions.
Dead: Thanks. This kind of constructive criticism is what I like about some of the people at this site
Daelin2: There is point in honest judgement. Something is boring because it does not suit your needs. Would you degrade women's products if you were a man? Of course not, because you cannot use them in a way which it would suit a need. Same with literature
Sorry Seagull, but I utterly detest Old English because: 1: It is heavily stereotyped 2: All the more "boring" for these naive fools
And this is NOT a fanfic. Is Intaro some sort of warcraft continent? Probably not. This is based of nothing, just a storyline. I have a bit of first chapter done, but it's bullsh&*
