This is the loading screen for my new upcoming campaign - Space Station Alpha. These will be coming in parts one at a time. The loading screen is for Stage One: The Beginnings.
Horn
#2
Seems very plain. You could put some graphics into it.
The following words are also spelt wrong:
Wronge = wrong Transfered = Transferred disapearances = disappearance(s) [its not actually a word.] begginnings = beginnings
Also "thats" should be "that's", and lose the comma after 'These'.