I hope thats not your skin... If it is then it looks like it could be lizard man Shade it better Take out that blood Add scales I don't know if there is a nose or not but... take out those lines Muscles could be done better (esp;ecially abs) Make that top part dissap;ear
Also make the scales colorful so you dont notice the horrible black lines
THe scales look better THe outlines of the nose and cheek bones a bit deep still The abs are still not life like Teeth are a bit weird the blood still looks like a bunch of running lines, how bout a sp;latter/smudge/little droplet -You can always ad a special animation to his head latter
Is this a malitia model? this may be a hard one to convert like what youre trying to do
Dude, just sit for 3 hours and do w/e you can think of to it. then show us, and we will answer. This is really too early for crits. You aren't even done with the base shading. The best stage for posting a wip (if one thinks posting a wip is good) would probably be the stage where everything, except the details.
Sooo, my advice: Work on it for some hours, and come back
