All in all pretty good. I assume its for warcraft!? I would increase the detail on the face. Maybe extrude the googles and recess them in the hood, fix up the "reverberator" a bit (unless you'll add detail with skin). Add alittle chest detail to break up the large flat section, maybe straps to hold the tanks with a center buckle. Other than those two things, he's well preportioned, I love the hands!, and the gun is nice too!
Hands is way 2 detailed, if you're gonna mass these, then you better reduce the polies there, and let the skin do its job. If it's a hood, then it's ok, but if not you might consider making a neck. The oxygen tanks are good. mask could be a little smaller, not so wide. And the spikes on the gun seem uneccersary since it wont be noticed in-game. This is really good, but rely on the skin more.
Please tell me how to do. It looks really cool by me. is it in gmax? Are you using a sphare? That you form like a Unit??? Is it how you do? Please answear
so one Cube from the chest and shoudlers to bellie? And the arms shall be on that cube? How do i make the arms? shall i split them from the side of the body?